Make it close them. Before the room.
In a nutshell
What it is
A fixed-scope sprint that scores your deck structure against 200+ successful raises, traces your narrative arc, surfaces objections, and delivers specific rewrite recommendations.
What you get
Structural score, narrative arc analysis, objection map, slide-level diagnostics, and rewrite recommendations you can brief your team on Monday.
Who it's for
Founders preparing a raise whose deck gets meetings but does not close them. Investors pattern-match against hundreds of pitches. The structure either holds under scrutiny or it does not.
2 weeks · From £12,000
Could be on your desk by the 28 April
The difference between a meeting and a
cheque is whether the structure holds.This sprint scores your deck against what actually converts, surfaces the objections before the room does, and gives you a rewrite brief. One senior consultant. Direct access. No handoff.
How we get there
01
Scoping callYour stage, raise target, and current deck. What meetings you have had, what objections came up, and what moved.
02
Structural benchmarkingSlide order, information density, and pacing scored against 200+ funded raises. The patterns that convert, mapped against yours.
03
Narrative arc traceWhere the story builds momentum, where it stalls, and where the logical thread breaks. The arc that carries attention from slide to slide.
04
Objection surfacingThe questions investors will ask that the deck does not answer. Identified before the meeting, not during it.
05
Slide-level diagnosticsEach slide scored for clarity, purpose, and persuasive weight. Redundant slides identified. Missing slides flagged.
06
Deliver rewrite briefSpecific direction on what to change and why. Structural fixes tied to investor psychology. Full handoff.
Clear deliverables
Who leads this sprint
Senior consultants. Direct access.
These are the consultants who can lead this sprint. Explore their profiles and connect directly with the one who fits your situation.
Ray Tarantino
Marketing Strategy & Operations · 20+ years
The things that actually move a business tend to be the things nobody is tracking.
Location
UK, Italy
Silvia Scherini
Strategic Marketing & Brand Operations · 20+ years
Closes the gap between the deck and the outcome.
Location
Italy
Lapo Brogi
Brand Intelligence & Marketing Strategy · 25+ years
Builds the marketing culture that makes the team work.
Location
Thailand
Ready to know if the structure holds?
30-minute scoping call. No obligation. No pitch.
Every engagement starts with a scoping call. Same price. Shaped to your situation.